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Bulwinkel uses a women's youth wrestling tournament in a dusty gym in Nevada to pit girls who have figured out how to use their bodies like machines against each other to explore the rich dynamics that emerge between them. Really opened my eyes to what you can do with the novel. She deftly builds a diorama with the layers of similarities, differences and complementing qualities of the girls, while their future past present smear and smudge with the light, full of character as it matures over the day as the backdrop.
Bulwinkel uses a women's youth wrestling tournament in a dusty gym in Nevada to pit girls who have figured out how to use their bodies like weapons against each other in order to explore the rich dynamics that emerge between them. Really opened my eyes to what you can do with the novel. She deftly builds a diorama with paper layers of the girls' similarities, differences and complementing qualities, while their future past present smear and smudge with the light, full of character as it matures over the day, as the backdrop.
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Bulwinkel sets her women's youth wrestling tournament in a dusty Nevada gym, using it as a crucible where girls who've learned to wield their bodies like weapons collide. Through these fierce encounters, she explores the complex, shifting dynamics between them. The novel opened my eyes to what fiction can do. Bulwinkel constructs something like a diorama—layered, delicate, and precise—revealing the girls’ similarities, differences, and complementary traits. Time blurs in the background—their futures, pasts, and presents smearing together in the evolving light of the day—rich with character, quietly deepening as the story unfolds.
Bulwinkel uses a women's youth wrestling tournament in dusty Reno to pit girls, who have figured out how to use their bodies like weapons, against each other, in order to explore the rich dynamics, that emerge between them. She deftly builds a diorama with paper layers of the girls' similarities, differences and complementing qualities, their future past present smearing and smudging on paper yes paper(!), with the maturing daylight as backdrop. Really opened my eyes to what you can do with the novel.
Bulwinkel uses a women's youth wrestling tournament in a dusty Nevada gym to pit girls who have figured out how to use their bodies like weapons against each other, in order to explore the rich dynamics that emerge between them. She deftly builds a diorama with paper layers of the girls' similarities, differences and complementing qualities, their future present past smearing and smudging, and the maturing daylight as backdrop. Really opened my eyes to what you can do with the novel.
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